Elevator Pitch No. 2


Here is my updated Elevator speech. For the first speech, I only received one comment which was completely positive. I was glad it was, but unfortunately I had no constructive criticism to improve on. For this elevator speech I pitched my restaurant inventory reselling idea. I gave myself feedback and improved my posture, cadence, speed, and eye contact from the first elevator speech.

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  1. Nicolas ShenoJuly 13, 2020 at 1:00 AM

    Hey Jean,
    I really like that you introduced with the fact that your family is in the food business, I believe it sets you apart from most people and displays that you are extremely knowledgable about what you are talking about. I believe that the improvements that you made really make an overall difference and shows that you are comfortable speaking about your product!

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